Posted by: dibennett on: November 25, 2008
Drumroll, please…
Ok so here it is, the formal group proposal report we have all been waiting for. This is what we had been working on since November 4th.
Here is the general goal of the report in Dr. Fricke’s words, just so I don’t have to try and explain it myself:
Your group proposal will analyze a problem or issue and argue for a certain specific course of action or viewpoint based on this analysis. You will not actually implement a solution to the issue or problem you describe. Instead, you will simply describe how a group could go about attempting to solve the problem you present. Alternatively, you might not even offer a specific solution. You could, for example, simply describe how a group would go about studying the problem in more depth to develop a solution. For a more complete discussion of these types of documents (Markel calls them “recommendation reports”), look in the textbook (particularly pp.484-486).
Defining a clear, focused, easily researchable issue or problem is a critical first step to success in this assignment. Think about choosing an issue from your school experience, your workplace, your community involvement, or something else that you are personally familiar with. Try to deal with something local that you already know about. If you choose a more general subject, try to find a way to apply the subject to local circumstances (a neighborhood or community) or to someone you know (a group of friends, colleagues, or co-workers).
Again, keep in mind that the more focused and specific your subject and problem statement, the more straightforward your report will be. For example, you might consider defining a narrow problem statement that applies directly to a group of people that you can actually meet with. You would then be able to very easily and quickly create small surveys or conduct some interviews to provide very specific data for supporting your conclusions or recommendations. This kind of primary research can produce very convincing proposals. Therefore, think about who you might contact or interview for information when you consider what to research. Also think about relatively simple and straightforward (but very convincing) primary research like diagrams and photographs. If you plan carefully, you’ll discover that it is actually relatively easy to fill a ten to fifteen page formal report no matter how small your issue at first appears.
Finally, your report will be written for a specific audience that you will define. You will need to directly address your proposal report to an person who represents this audience. You won’t have to actually send your report to this person, but writing to someone specific will make it much easier to edit the report for tone and content. It will also make your final proposal report potentially quite useful for real people looking for possible solutions to difficult local problems.
Ok that was really long, I know. Sorry.
Our group decided to do our report on promoting local rainwater harvesting. That was actually our official title that we used throughout the project. If you took the time to read all of my previous memos and rough drafts and stuff then you should have a pretty clear idea of what the report was about. We ended up getting an 85 on our report. We all were accepting of it, but we all thought that we did better than that and might have deserved an A, compared to some of the other group’s proposals. Oh well, that’s water under the bridge, and a B isn’t a bad grade.
Along with our formal report was our presentation. We weren’t required to write an entry on it but I decided I could hit on a few points since it ties into the report. We were asked to give a presentation on our report that met a few goals that Dr. Fricke posted on his website. The class was grading the presentation, so we decided to aim it at them. We made it as short as possible and as interesting as possible with a video clip. We also brought donuts and juice for incentive. We ended up getting a 91 on the presentation and I think we were all pleased with that grade. It was an easy presentation to give especially during the ‘crunch time’ of the semester. I walked out of class feeling refreshed because most of my work for that class was done.
Our report was professional and informative. We did a lot of research on it and tried to make it as realistic as possible. Here are some examples of other group’s proposals:
-Implementing a Sex Education Program in LISD
-The BCS: Why it Doesn’t Measure Up
-Bike Laws on Campus
There were some good proposals, but maybe I thought ours was so good was because it was dealing with some ‘green’ issues and I’ve worked a lot this semester with that sort of subject and I was excited about it. Regardless, it was a good report that we put a lot of hard work into. I think the most important thing is that we walked away proud of the work that we had done.
So here is our final report: